Check It and Get Nake It...........

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Check It and Get Nake It...........

To keep my hands warm in the storm...
I place on da browniee's loc...
Like a pair of vise grips...
I'll send chills down your spine...
As if I was a investigative reporter...
Call me the missing esposide from the Okalohoma Masscare...
I'm sorter out of order but Fuck It...
Let me warn you Apartheid has not only held are people captive...
But has sacrificed little children today and possibly 2-morrow...
Without any sorrows my shots come with the Penitentary Beatdown...
While Mutha-Fuckas was trippin on that Y-2K Bullshit...
The increase of Famine proceeded to increase...
Like Grath Brooks on Tour...
The Horror just might include Yo Ass as well as My Ass burning in a incinerator...
Behind Every Shadow Lurks a Untold Story...
So Grasp The Sounds Of Paronia...
To Find A Particular Headstone In This Mortuary...
Postpone Getting Your Fortunate Told By The Hypodermic Needle...
I Sign Autographs With......

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cutbanksam commented on Check It and Get Nake It...........

01-07-2011

You are out of your fucking mind if you think violence will kill racism or any other of society's ills. What is needed is for everyone and I do mean everyone to do their very very best at not even thinking about color when dealing with another person. But you did get my attention

tenderpoison commented on Check It and Get Nake It...........

05-24-2009

last two lines are a killer...whole thing is a statement to make one think. I'd need a meaningful dialogue to better understand you perspective as a black man (as I'm a white chic unqualified to comment on content) but artistically it's sound and music is wonderful. loved it....get's a ten

SteelPulse

07/01/2009

Good Lookin On The Shout Out...Mo 2 Com

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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