Coma of Love

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Love everlasting to you and yours are my sincere wishes....

Coma of Love

With an aroma reminiscent of collard greens,

macaroni and cheese and fried chicken

My mores for amore got me head over heels falling,

from a shot straight to my kitchen

Delicious is my reaction of salivating,

to this reaction to a love of love salvation

Standing straight at attention,

but smiling infinitely at almost any and all dispositions

Wandering with aim to aimlessly follow

the beacon of heat to my love’s eternal burning

Exaggerated movements of expression,

performed in precious moments of sexing,

Interpretive of my inward desires

to outwardly manifest and project cherishing

I’m an escapee from the fantasy of society’s reality,

giving and providing all I need

Arriving to my destiny,

succinctly planned out in my dreams of fancy in romancing

While outside of me looking in,

the world is assured of my complacency in not being

Never receiving the proper stock of valuing world chaos

as the proper mode and code

Blankly smiling and sleeping , happily ever after days,

and years recycled and repeated

These are ailments of utter enjoyment I wish for you to share

enjoying forever forever

Winking for forty(s) times forty,

waking up to comfort and security completely,

completing enjoyment and Total Fulfillment,

autonomously living life in a coma of love…..

 

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thecross commented on Coma of Love

04-26-2010

Nice write, great imagery used here and creatively expressed.

SILKYTWEED

04/27/2010

Thank you so much for the honor of your encouraging comments...Namaste

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

SILKYTWEED’s Poems (132)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Love Shows 0
MIST 0
Crowds of Misery 1
MY DEFENSE 0
Across My Heart 0
Object of Your Projection 0
Love Tribbles 1
Survival Is Never Casual 4
Solace from the Masses 1
Love Rehearsals 2
Can I Get It????? 2
Feats By Hands....(aka Feets and Hands-ticipat
ion)
1
Inscribe Life's Embers 0
All I'm Say........ 0
The Retro Nubian Futuristic Afro Story 5
Mind Blowing 3
YANKEE ROLE MODELING.... 3
MY SYNONYMOUS EXISTENTIAL 1
Hue Beings 1
Forefathers to the Fatherless 1
Playing For When..,... 0
Write Out Pain 1
DISCIPLINE IN THOUGHT DISCIPLES 0
Best Believe LOVE 0
Love Is..... 1
A Playa's Creed 1
MY LOVE TODAY......FO
REVER
1
I Still Wear Yesterdays' 0
The Grammar of Posting 0
ACCESS DENIED 0
Of the Unwanted 0
Precipitation in the Valley 0
A Reluctant Tool 1
Love Roots 1
A Look Into Eyes 0
Don't Feed the Animal!!! 0
Eyes in SanPaKu 0
‘The gallows and the sea refuse nothing,’ 0
A HEAVY ROTATION 0
Mourning Til Daylight 2
LETTER TO ALCOHOL, FROM ANONYMOUS 0
Saved By A Rainbow 3
Cascading Waterfalls 2
Coma of Love 1
Disclaiming Destinations 1
A Love-Hate Relationship'
s Finest Hour.......No
? Yes!
0
Perfectly Being 1
WORDS OF SPITE 0
OF LOVE CONSEQUENCE..
...
2
Drugs of Choice 1
THE BAG 1
OFFENSIVE....
.
0
THE AIR I BREATHE 0
Indivisible Faith 1
MY CLAIM 2b 0
A Warrior's Promise 2
REFLECTION ON AFFECTION 2
TRAFFICKING IN FEELING 1
Ungrateful Relatives 1
AMERICAN IDLE 0
ACAPELLA HOLLA (an acrostic poetic piece) 0
Watching Her Movie Move Me 0
A Held-Over Engagement (The Story of Co-Dependency
)
0
To Come Through..... 0
COPING 0
Keeping Love UP 3
FISH KILLS 1
DON'T MIND ME 1
SONGS OF A RENEGADE 2
KNIGHTS OF BLACKNESS 1
How Many(s)....A Life's Daily Conversion 0
Love Done Left Here 1
THE RIDE TO WORK 3
MUTE COMMUNICATION 2
LOVE TREASON 0
Love Me Like A Brother 0
Nurturing the Nature of Love 2
PERSONAL REVOLUTION 0
CEILING TO ETERNITY 0
THE LAST SUMMER NIGHT 0
WRITES OF WRONG 0
LOVE DAZE 0
CHEESE IN THE CRUST 0
BACK IN THE DAYZ versus NOW A DAYZ 0
OBSESSION OF CURRENCY 0
PEACE OF MIND 2
Cakewalking 0
What Was IS Always 1
BABY ITS COLD OUTSIDE 2
CAN'T TAKE BACK WHAT I DONE PUT IN 3
EXPANSION 0
THE BOOK 0
PASSION ATTACK 0
WHAT'S THE STORY 3
MARCH TO SEPTEMBER LOVE 4
TO CLIMB FROM BEHIND 2
A FISH OUT OF WATER 1
The Siren 0
AWAKEN TO LOVE 2
MULTITUDES OF THE ONE 1
MY ILL BLUES 0
Travels of the Fool 2
I ASPIRE 3
Love's Goodbye 4
MY HEART HEARS YOU 4
MY HOOD (a fairy real tale) 1
NEEDIN' A READING 5
WATCHIN' "THE" NEWS 0
Life Recognition 3
WHEN LOVE AIN'T NEW 2
MY STAR 2
SILENCE 2
IDENTITY 2
Love Revenge 2
Panhandlin' Love 2
FAMILY OR PEOPLE WHO LIVE WITH ME 2
Intention of Attention 0
Oh Say Can't You See 1
A Love's Debt 2
PIMP'S KARMA 1
Travelin' Without Moving 0
HIS STORY IS MY STORY’S MYSTERY 0
GIVE ME THIS DAY 0
Intense Heat from a By Chance Meet.... 2
BATTLE OF RELEVANCE 3
WHAT DO I DO? 4
My Fruity Passion 1
That Feeling of Reeling 1
IF A WOMAN WANTS YOU 2
A Woman’s Design 4
INSPIRATION 3
THE MIRROR 9