Crying

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    Crying

    Crying sad tears

    as they hit the ground

    stay away don’t come around

    my soul weeps tears of blood

    knowing you don't care

    makes me frown

    words of love flow so sweet

    actions given are shards of glass in my feet

    don’t speak its painful to hear

    the lies that proceed that sounds so pure

    help please help

    I’m drowning in sorrow

    tears drop they fall so slow

    as if I was in slow motion seeing it appear

    get loose from this vortex of life

    just to be happy

    that would be nice.

    R.L.R.

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    tenderpoison commented on Crying

    01-22-2011

    love the final lines - that would be nice. :) after all is said and done, happy and sad lie in our choices and they're outcome.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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