Dare to Dream

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Dare to Dream

Hopes, dreams, desires

Is all that I have now,

And if I could, I know I would

For fill them all somehow.

I have the hope of happiness

Of someone who will care,

Of someone who will love me

And know that I'll be there.

I have so many dreams

I'm unable to for fill,

I somehow quit on dreaming

I somehow lost my will.

I sometimes have desires

A longing to be free,

No one knows the tears I shed

No body knows but me.

My hopes, my dreams, desires

Will always be my own,

I'll hold them till the day I die

Or when I'm all alone.

When again I dare to dream.

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thejazzpoet commented on Dare to Dream

07-27-2009

Shadowwalker... an excellent poem, I actually thought for a moment that this was my life you were speaking of. I felt as though I was reliving, remembering and writing the words. Believe me, I've been there; I'm there now. You have the ability to begin and end a composition without losing your focus and objective. Your poem left me with so much to contemplate over. thank you for sharing. thejazzpoet

Shadowwalker

08/10/2009

TY it was my pleasure to share this with others. Shadow

jademelissa74 commented on Dare to Dream

05-31-2009

I like the journey of this poem, it is clear, yet deep. Hope is an evidence that there is a God in Heaven, when you least expect it that "Someone" will arrive. It always work out that way :) Great job!

Shadowwalker

06/01/2009

Ty hon for the comment.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Shadowwalker’s Poems (35)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Giving 2
In her Eyes 4
Keep Dreaming 1
Until 2
Are You Willing 1
Us 1
Never Ending 1
My Dreams 2
An Endless Vision 1
The Artist Dream 6
One Came Home 6
My Best Friend 2
Maiden 6
Loves Steps 4
Love 1
Lost 1
Longing 2
I Know 4
Grandma's Words 1
Freedom 1
Dare to Dream 2
Could Be Me 4
Candy Kisses 3
Can You #1 3
Bobbie 1
Betrayal 2
Alone 2
Wasted Words 1
A Time to heal 1
A single Rose 4
A Dream 2
ButterFly Kisses 5
The Rose 2
The Raven 6
Secret Lover 8