darkness swallows 6-8-2010

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darkness swallows 6-8-2010

sometimes the darkness swallows us up inside
sometimes it has to so that we can all hide
where do we go inside this pitch black
where do we hide in this giant black sack.

why are we here most people will never know
from deep inside  is where we truly go
all because the darkness we all hold inside
is because we all feel like we need to hide.

people are evil, yet people are good
and so many others are just misunderstood.
what words do they say, what clothes do they wear
they have their own style, and no one should care

yet people do and the madness consumes,
they yell and scream at what our kids do
no freedom, no opinion, no way to speak
the variation of themselves are what todays kids seek.

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TheLastCowboy commented on darkness swallows 6-8-2010

10-26-2013

wow what a powerful write!!! Great job, this reminds me alot of Iraq, dont really know why but it does. This makes such a powerful statement in so many ways.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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