Dawning

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    • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

    Dawning
          The day is dawning
          and the time is coming

          the hour of excitement
          beings a new year

          were struggles come to an end
          then a new struggle begins

          days come
          and days goes

          as time passes us by

          we realize how small we are
          and what little time we have

          the day is dawning

          the hour is coming

          when we all wish we could do it again

          time pass us by

          many failures and many achievements

          and its coming

          when your old life becomes a new

          the day is dawning

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    Shadow70 commented on Dawning

    07-21-2009

    Very good...A simple statement but a VERY important one.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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