Day Dreams and Magic

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    Day Dreams and Magic

    I laid upon the grass one day
    And dreamed of places far away
    Of palace gates and carpet rides
    Of dragon scales and moonbeam slides

    Where butterflies were spun of gold
    And Unicorns with fairies told
    The tales of selkies and magic wands
    Where rainbows dipped to drink from ponds

    I rode the clouds amongst the trees
    Catching rides on wings of bee's
    I danced a jig in clovers four
    With elves and sprites from times of yore

    I followed bunnies to their dens
    Chased fireflies to earth again
    To proudly stand on hollow ground
    Where knights in armor once abound

    Then back to sky I flew on leaves
    That carried songs upon my sleeves
    Back to the field where I reposed
    To end my dream as daylight closed

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Day Dreams and Magic

    09-13-2009

    Simply Lovely and well written rhyming and use of descriptives. I felt it all and enjoyed it immensely..Like dining on a feast of imagery and emotions...

    Tempestlady commented on Day Dreams and Magic

    08-01-2009

    You get a 10 from me. Such wonderful and colorful imagery, perfect rhyme, right on time! Magic, and beauty painted for all to see. Freedom from earthly bonds. Write on.....

    LenaMP

    08/01/2009

    Thank you for the kind comments about my poems. I am so glad that you liked them.

    dragonfly1023 commented on Day Dreams and Magic

    07-31-2009

    ahhhhhh. such a golden woven tale. your wonderful imagination and writing skills have created a magical journey LenaMP. simply excellent!!

    LenaMP

    08/02/2009

    Thanks. I love the magical!

    ginga commented on Day Dreams and Magic

    07-31-2009

    Lena, You're singing to me now! What a lovely, spirited, and certainly whimsical piece. I have to say this a fave of mine. I am referring it to Dragonfly cause he loves this genre. WoW all these different scenes like the falling of a curtain in between acts in a play. For that matter you could write a script from this. Peter Pan could use an updated version! ginga

    blu commented on Day Dreams and Magic

    05-15-2009

    This poem allows my imagination to be free, very well done!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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