Days Become Longer

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Days Become Longer

Days become longer & harder to swallow,
Doomed as a marter,
I'm stuck on the bottle.
Inside looking out,
But no insides are left.
For I'm clouded by doubt & riddled with stress.
What else is left?
Sometimes I will ponder,
How to undo this mess before I'm a gonner.
Stuck in my ways,
This part I know.
So I work through my days,
And I stay home alone.
Now I'm not a villen,
But my lifes like a monster,
That just keeps on killin as my days become longer.
Somehow I stay stronger,
Im still alive,
All I can do is continue to strive,
And continue to struggle.
Keep going...keep trying to get through my troubles.
I know it sounds rough cause I'm no good at suttle.
Till I've had enough...hard work makes me humble.
Till I start to stumble,
I think that you follow,
My days become longer and harder to swollow.


Japheth

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AIXA commented on Days Become Longer

04-05-2009

Waoo one of the kind!

dahlusion commented on Days Become Longer

01-05-2009

fantastic display of emotion & confusion &…behold…despair cloaks the soul

beautifuldeath commented on Days Become Longer

01-05-2009

I truly enjoy reading your darker ones, they speak to me. Keep writing you are very talented.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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