Dead Man Inside

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  • Papa
  • Sitting, waiting on the world to turn

Dead Man Inside

If you dig too deep, you'll hit the core.
They're parts deep inside that are still sore.
Emotions long for the light of day,
but my dignity has locked them all away.
Under dried tears and coated in brine,
is a heart so long since been left behind.
Surrounded by should have, could have been,
 is the heart of a child in the chest of dead men.
So many versions they are of me,
I have to look deep inside,to see which one I may be.
I put on a smile and unpack a new face,
but lost in a wrinkle, is a stain of disgrace.
I'm doing just fine, but if you look real close,
I'm not really real, just a shadow, a ghost.
The life of the party, a really great guy,
passing all in the fast lane, while inside we die.
My soul's on the exit ramp; will work for true love.
My body throws trash out of the window, as he passes above.
Nothing personal now. No entry inside.
If I promised you more, I'm sorry we lied.

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sanctus commented on Dead Man Inside

02-22-2011

Interesting piece. Perhaps a bit too heavy on obvious rhymes, but not too shabby a write

sevyn7 commented on Dead Man Inside

02-22-2011

Great write, Sev'n..............................................

knight4696 commented on Dead Man Inside

09-19-2010

Whoa .. Papa, get outta my head!! lol! :) I can definitely relate to this one. I was on that same highway for a very long time .. hence the armor I don. It is hard to shed the layers and expose oneself, but if one does not let their guard down and let someone in .. they will wither alone and die inside. Awesome emotion packed write! :) Ken

fromthespirit commented on Dead Man Inside

09-18-2010

A lot of emotions I have felt also. I love the way you express yourself in this touching poem.

SavVySam commented on Dead Man Inside

09-12-2010

This is true of many, who burying themselves behind layers..as protection for the heart...if only that was sufficient. Good write..

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