Dead....

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    Dead....

    Have you ever watched,
    as someone died.
    The tears came,
    as you cried.

    The look on their face,
    a blank stare.
    To close their eyes,
    you wouldn't dare.

    You sat beside them,
    as they slipped away.
    You stayed there,
    all night and day.

    Your in a shock,
    you cannot move.
    Gone were the things,
    you could have proved.

    All the things,
    you would've said.
    You had a chance,
    but now they're dead.

    You'll live with that,
    all your life.
    But never, not once,
    did you pick up a knife.

    Don't make the mistakes,
    that they once did.
    You've known what's right,
    since you were a kid.

    Have you ever watched,
    as someone died.
    The tears came,
    as you cried.

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    DARKONE commented on Dead....

    01-31-2009

    great work

    bandit1192 commented on Dead....

    01-26-2009

    Each poem I read, just gets better and better. You are very good.

    KJULEST commented on Dead....

    01-25-2009

    intense

    bforibus commented on Dead....

    01-24-2009

    wow, i felt the emotion in this. it was like a scared victim of a friend's friend commiting suicide

    Realistic commented on Dead....

    01-24-2009

    I like this one. makes u think...

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    Emilia’s Poems (17)

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    Unreal 0
    Mask 0
    Found. 2
    Fit In 1
    Imaginary 0
    Destiny 1
    Empty 2
    Mental Warning 0
    Life 0
    Distance 1
    Keep going 2
    God's Tears? 1
    Heart 3
    Insane? 7
    A Game? 9
    Dead.... 5
    Death or Freedom? 4