Death Becomes My Light

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Death Becomes My Light

My blood, thats all everyone wants
so sick of this shit, lies and taunts
everyday the same face, masquerade
time, endless, yet i fade

they make my stress grow, day to day
so fucking tired, of how they treat me that way
they killed my morals, i dont care for life
so now i come to school with a shotgun and knife

First one teases, justice is served
this is for the pain i never deserved
others see, and begin to panic
my knife met to the hilt of someones stomache

fuck you all, now you beg and cry!
as i point my gun into your eye
you talk big with your friends near by
i dont belive your soul will fly

Justice, just like in days of old
Justice, from a mind, desperate, cold
Justice, God's light in silver and copper
Justice, as i serve a sentence, because i deliver!

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RPT40 commented on Death Becomes My Light

02-28-2010

Hell yeah!! This is in the face of a very sensitive subject. I like fearless writing, and that's what this is - Great job!

mustascheman commented on Death Becomes My Light

02-20-2010

Wow! Powerful stuff. Is this something that you would like to do to those around you? These are feelings I had also at your age, I think you and I discussed this before. If these people you refer to are 'on you' as it seems, there are ways of dealing with them other than what you describe. I do know that on the last page of the other, other 'good' book it reads in part..'do unto others twice what they do unto you'...I've found that sometimes this works, sometimes not! Let me know, I've an extra ear to bend, so to speak.

EvilPoems

02/20/2010

iight, ill try that, thanks man, i appreciate it

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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