Death or Freedom?

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    Death or Freedom?

    The snow is falling,
    ever so slow.
    My heart is beating
    sincerely low.

    My breath is soft
    and my lips are cold.
    My arms are numb
    and my soul is sold.

    I waited for you
    but you never came.
    I guess that means
    I'm the one to blame.

    Life means nothing
    now that you're gone.
    I told you I'll be dead,
    just before the dawn.

    I'll lay here still,
    and wait to see.
    If God agrees,
    then I'll be free.

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    christliked commented on Death or Freedom?

    01-26-2009

    knew you had skills these great

    KJULEST commented on Death or Freedom?

    01-25-2009

    this is very well written.. we have similar writng form

    Realistic commented on Death or Freedom?

    01-24-2009

    wow kid. good read

    Vincent commented on Death or Freedom?

    01-13-2009

    (GP) keep the ink flowing. Smiles Vincent

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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