DEEP

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DEEP

I HAVE FEELINGS DEEP ENOUGH TO SWIM IN.

TAKE A CHANCE WITH ME AND DIVE IN.

LET'S SPLASH TOGETHER AND ROMP IN OUR LOVE.

LET'S SEND PRAISE AND BLESSINGS UP ABOVE.

THIS POOL OF LOVE IS DEEP NEVER SHALLOW.

IT SOARS ABOVE LIKE THE FLYING SWALLOW.

I HAVE FEELINGS DEEP ENOUGH TO SWIM IN.

YOU DON'T EVER HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT DROWNING.

MY LOVE WILL CATCH YOU AND PROTECT YOU.

MY LOVE WILL FEED YOU AND HEED YOU.

MY LOVE IS DEEP.

               NO NEED FOR COLD FEET.


TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY

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shakeme4life commented on DEEP

10-17-2010

as i read this , it sounds like a pleading ... i wanna scream , if the person doesn't realize it's worth it , nothing i can do about that ... as beyonce says , " why you think they all mad at me " Upgrade

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/18/2010

Not only that don't be afraid of love. No matter what you do the deep stuff of life will find you. Thanks for your feedback I truly value your opinion........E

Chaos128 commented on DEEP

10-14-2010

Ha ha C'mon in, the water's fine. You deal some cool dual meanings, here, E; such as, yeah, the water's deep, but it's safe. And, though, it's available to be enjoyed, that doesn't mean it's available to be played with. I got news for you... you're good at this : )

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/15/2010

Leave it to you to get it. You interpreted my feelings exactly. My love is deep never shallow, don't play with me. Thank you for reading and commenting. Thank you for your stamp of approval........E ;-)

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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