Deeply Rooted

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  • Jedi4Jesus
  • haven't been on the sight for awhile but had written a couple poems i'd like to invite everyone to read, What it's all about and You Promised

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Friday, February 20, 2009 at 1:05am

Deeply Rooted

Smiling cheek to cheek
and looking upward as I say "Thank You".
I'm praising God the Father,
for the woman I said "I do" too.
For my Lord and Great Physician,
who is masterful at His craft.
Has written a perfect prescription
for my wife's life to last.
I'm so excited and fired up
for His salvation is The Cure.
I appreciate so much His covenant,
His commitment that is so pure.
His Word has been put to the test
and has stood the test of time.
To not believe all His promises
would truly be a crime.
So I approach His throne with confidence so much more than I did before,
For my convictions are deeply rooted.
Rooted deeply to the core.

Ramil

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MSVanallen commented on Deeply Rooted

07-05-2009

The tempests we face in life are the chords by which we are attached to God. Without tribulation, where would be the need for faith? MSV

CatsMeow commented on Deeply Rooted

06-29-2009

Very well said, thank you! There comes a point in your life when you realize: Who matters, Who never did, Who won't anymore..And who always will. "unknown" Praise God for another day.

jademelissa74 commented on Deeply Rooted

06-21-2009

You are such an inspiration to me. Thank you for sharing your story with us. God bless you! This is a brilliant poem!

Reallady65 commented on Deeply Rooted

06-21-2009

Sincere love, commitment and faith. Acceptance of His love and healing of her suffering as well as you loss but through your "convictions" you know that it is well with your soul... no greater love exists. Keep your head up and your heart open. Blessings.

dragonfly1023 commented on Deeply Rooted

06-21-2009

this is great!! powerful and eloquent words of coming to the realization that spiritualism and commitment to those beliefs are all any of us truly need to be saved. the body is but a shell encasing the spirit within us, and when the shell is gone the spirit is set free. knowing which direction to go from there... is faith.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Jedi4Jesus’s Poems (16)

Title Comments
Title Comments
LOVE 1
You Promised 1
What it's all about 0
THE DAY 0
I miss my mommy 2
Recovery 9
It is well 0
Grief 2
Why 4
Home Coming 2
Deeply Rooted 5
Quiet Desperation 3
Take Captive 2
My Walk 2
Bed Time Story 5
The Call 11