Delusion

7 Comments

Delusion

with a poisoned pen these words inscribe
some in truth while others lie
wrought of painful blind confession
lashing out with flawed perception

ever yearning for the light
forever hidden deep inside
untouchable and without sight
false prophet of deceptions right

cast aspersions and despair
yet claim these accusations fair
unloved, revile, retaliate
with evil, hateful, wicked spate

spurn the truth with convenient sighs
and spin whole cloth from webs of lies
then seek a love more perfect still
this empty, grasping heart to fill

the plaintive voice once given heed
planted only bitter seed
whispered words like toxic rain
and rendered all in shades of pain

the trusted counselor thus revealed
betrays the truth so long concealed

it was only ever I

who did believe the damned lie



Read more: http://authspot.com/poetry/delusion/#ixzz12GQnje65

Poem Comments

(7)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

StandingBear commented on Delusion

01-12-2011

TP, there certainly are those whom enjoy twisting their tales and spewing their *self-made laws* on others for their own unfathomable reasons no one wishes to acknowledge understanding. Always there exists a balance without one even having to lift a finger....SBear

tenderpoison

01/12/2011

Thanks Bear - I enjoy your comments quite a bit you know. You're one of the few here who really respond to what's being said. - Tender

StandingBear

01/13/2011

Yw TP, i'm honored by your kind comments. Reading your finely written work is enjoyable. Now i've been told by many that i'm far too outspoken...Lol...SBear

devaamido commented on Delusion

12-19-2010

Tender: This is truly a powerhouse of poetic expression! I love it!! This goes into my "short-list". Thanks!!

tenderpoison

12/19/2010

Thanks again - I just write from where I'm at.

kdarcy commented on Delusion

12-13-2010

Your pen is so intense with the truth and the pain you feel, you have been lashing out for some time now, may your road find the destination that your heart seeks, be well k

RHPeat commented on Delusion

12-07-2010

Fooling ourselves. Yes that does happen on occasion. The metaphor isn't too deep and rhyming is a little rough and forced sounding in stanza 2 but most of it rides well for me. A poet friend// RH Peat

HarverTomsson commented on Delusion

11-23-2010

Like feeding a puppy out of sorts, loving you leads to a tangible mess. Speak Fifi, speak! Your poetry is irresistible. But I craved one more syllable in your finale, so I swapped damned for cur-sed and let out a sigh of relief. Fave line? Spin whole cloth from webs of lies. I wish I'd written that. Harv

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

tenderpoison’s Poems (116)

Title Comments
Title Comments
You Are...I am 2
la chanson de la petite mort 4
fallen 2
seasons 0
smoke 2
Thursdays Child 2
the edge 0
whispers 2
nothing left to say... 2
sense of season 2
suspension bridge 1
Legendary 1
Almost 3
compromise 1
the final line 1
weather report 6
lessons in loss 2
Walk Away 1
b*itch boots 5
fumbling, tumbling - falling down 6
metamorphosis mine 13
Secret Language 15
An Ode to StudlyVonFiel
dMarshall111D
ildoPic
7
everyothernig
ht
6
the ties that bind 15
spitting in the wind 9
paradigm 8
talking in tongues 10
cloudy skies 12
really 15
well, I guess I know what it's not.... 13
heart of stars 17
The Longest Road 14
Legacy 6
Despair 7
Delusion 7
Inflammatory 8
survival of the fittest 20
ephemeral 13
the fall of the inconsequenti
al
12
Modern Love 24
apathy the enemy 9
Oceans 7
Consummation 11
"I don't love you" I said 20
narcissus speaks 13
destination 9
expectations 6
worlds collide 6
afternoon delight 7
my addiction 19
spilt milk 8
bay-area tourist beware 6
reciprocal 7
take the lead 11
losing what's precious 20
figment 5
bacchus unveiled 9
genuine 24
fool's gold 13
silence speaks 9
dark temptation 10
glass beach 9
mother love 12
sweet nothing 9
lighthouse 6
unbound 8
One Moment 5
Michael Jackson is Dead 4
parley 4
unmasked 4
stand 5
sage 9
Rising 8
the last word 6
prelude to bliss 2
unstained 4
insatiable 3
not pretty 8
surrender 4
forsaken 5
kudos 5
fine dining 3
Pieces 4
the tree 16
inches 9
priceless 8
25 years 7
only a dream 9
reborn 5
flicker 5
unruffled 4
taking the air 6
cymbol song 4
strike zone 6
nine days in turlock 9
through the pale 8
redemption song 3
Wise Men Know 8
not so ancient history 7
my forefathers? 2
American Memorial 2
bitter harvest 4
unconquered 52
what's in a name? 5
Flattery 5
me and a tube of crazy glue 6
eternal vows 2
Old Friend 5
directions to destiny 4
Illumination II (a rewrite) 7
Illumination 6
submission - things they don't teach girls 22
Echo 20
Bride 16
Undone 21