Depression in her heart

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  • christianprep
  • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

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some people the take there life.. lucky my sister is still a live but its hard to even know what to do for the person its hard to know she is hurting, and knowing i cannot do a thing about it breaks my heart... but its what she said that drove me mad...... what can i do? how can i get those words out of my mind! i do not know what i will do if she does take her life i could not image living with out here

Depression in her heart

Depression in her heart
it comes and it does not go
sadness takes place
and all is unknown
tell a suicide attempt
then help is on its way
its not something simple
not something small
it something that takes time
its something that brakes a mothers heart
something that hurts a family
and now she seems to push me away
How can i help a sister
if she does not wish it
How can i sit her and see her pain
it makes my eyes swell
and then the tears the just fall
as i listened to her story
its sad when there nothing you can do
then you have to here her say
Why does it matter its my choice,
i know it hurts you but i don't care.
simply breaks my heart
now it seems i am sliping down
down into that dark depreasion
as i bundle it up inside
doing what i can to help my beloved sister
the tears the come they just fall

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redbloodink commented on Depression in her heart

06-07-2010

this piece ......... not sure what to say but I've been there cause I am me....... I've over come these feelings and I have come to love myself and all others and Jesus......... sounds like your friend is stuggleing with herself as I use too..... just be a friend and listen..... don't pass jugement if you here something you don't agree with or like just be that.... a friend ...... red

christianprep

08/24/2010

THANKS

redbloodink

08/25/2010

yw.......

LeslieMay commented on Depression in her heart

06-07-2010

I am very sorry you are having to go through this. Many young people have suicidal thoughts at least once. All you can do is be there for her, let her know you are there to listen to anything she has to say. Without passing judgement, just a shoulder to lean on. Get her involved, take her to do something she would enjoy. Show her that there is so much to live for! I know it's hard....I hope she overcomes this. Pray for her & know that God is listening.

christianprep

08/24/2010

THANKS

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