Deprivation

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  • Sadness

    Deprivation
    These nights of mine
    choking in a vine
    eternal days
    drowning always
    flooding light
    sleepless night
    death's release
    never at peace
    agony lasting
    shadows casting
    temporary relief
    a shallow reef
    dying from light
    no night
    no sleep
    all i could do,
    weep

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    Mk commented on Deprivation

    09-11-2009

    Brava Tony. Brava. This is very well written. Take your talent and work on it. I have no doubt that you can make something of yourself. You are 16 now so by the time you reach 20 you should be a mini Shakespeare. =)
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    XxPoeticxSoulxX commented on Deprivation

    06-29-2009

    Love it. i know the feeling trust me i know the feeling.
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    nakedtruth43 commented on Deprivation

    03-16-2009

    really well done
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    NayInLove commented on Deprivation

    03-08-2009

    lovely lovely
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    ArizonaPlay commented on Deprivation

    02-20-2009

    to be in touch with ur own self at such a young age it very powerful aply it somewhere and your life will be full
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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