desire-in progress 3-22-99

1 Comments

Poem Commentary

this poem/moment in time is a work in progress
it stems from a bedroom scene, or an office scene which was stuck in my head at the time it was written

i never learned how to sensor things, so in my mind all details flowed like a river of passion....only no secrets were left untold

desire-in progress 3-22-99

As you walked in really hott with desire,
i looked at your body and was red hot with fire.
I knew in a moment that you wanted me,
but then at that moment i could not see.

past your soft body, it did look the best,
if you think really hard then you will know why
i didn't say the rest.

in one hopeless moment i said,"hi how are you?"
your eyes gave me a look that i could not see through.
As  you bent onto the desk, your shirt came open
and out fell your firm soft breasts.

My pants ripped open and out came my cock,
it grew so large, so fast i was in shock.
I could not stop it nor would i try,
as you gazed hypnotically into my eye.

I tried to turn and go behind, a cabinet where i'd hoped to find.A moment of peace and and tranquility, where i could think and control me.

As i moved you were to quick, as you did grab my really hard prick.  At that moment i never knew, what came over me or you.

You pulled it close as it grew thick, as you did lick on my dick. Your body was opened and exposed to me, as i did play with it sexually.

You began to sweat really hott with desire, as the anticipation  for me to go deep rose higher and higher.

As you laid there open with eyes looking mean, you were the most gorgeous woman i had ever seen.
I tried one last time to think the right way,  to tell you to
leave and have a nice day.

To know you were here to do as i wish, I grabbed your warm body and gave it a kiss.
I began to rub you all over and  play with your score, as i
kissed you  gently u said"give me more".

I stood near you with my cock hard a s a brick, in your hands  and near your body it grew really thick.
I knew in a moment that i was no match, as you grabbed
my thick hard cock, and thrust it into your snatch.
I could no longer resist nor did i try, you had my body and

i did not care how or why.
Your soft nipples on, i sucked,  As we passionately made
love and fucked.

At that moment i did see that you screamed aloud and came all over me. With your puss as soft and as wet as wine, I laid you back and said you looked fine.

You did lay back and had a grin, i gave you a moment to
breathe before i did begin.

To suck you deep is what i crave, as i did lick deep as
your slave. I made you scream and made you cumm,as i did drink you like red rum.

You are good as cherry pie, very gorgeous and very fly.
I licked you deep as your legs did spread, i began to move
but you held my head.

moving now i could not do, you pushed my face deep and then  i knew. to hold your legs and hold them tight, because when you came  their would be a fight.

You start to kick and your ass grew firm, you moan real loud
 and begin to squirm.

you begin to cum, and said " if you move i will kill, then
that moment i could no longer hold you still.
You danced around just like a bear, you flipped on my face
and rode my toungue there.

Soon it was over and your body fell down, i turned you over and continued to go down.You were done but i was not, because eating your pussy made  me quite hott.

You said no but did not resist, my tongue went deep and you  acted pissed.

You gave it up and did not fight, making you cum felt, oh so right. i licked your clit, and then went down  and swirled my tongue all around.

In your passion flower i did get deep, as you made more then just a peep.  you said "please no more i do demand", as you held my head there  with your hand.

I fingered your passion and licked your clit, as you cum many times  and said please don't quit.

You gave up and said i am your slave, for i have no more energy to save. but no one thing  when i was you do as you wish, i have to go. i have to wizz.

at that moment i was done, i drew back from so much fun.
I knew then that you did not have to pee, so i went down, and licked deeper into your wet pussy.

I cleaned you off, and licked you dry, i sat back and laughed as you  did look high, i laid you back and let you sleep, massaged your body and you can made no peep.

you felt warm lying next to me, holding my big cock while
 rubbed your hott wett pussy.

during the next morning, before you got up, i went down on
you and made you erupt.

you cum much and did  yell mush, as you awoke from the energy rush. i slowly began to lick your clit, as i massagged your breasts and sucked your tit.

you are happy, as i fell asleep, sucking your nipples while
you held me i made no peep.

incase you were wondering why i slept so fast,
5 am for such an energy blast. i lay silesnt as you held me,
close sucking your nipples as did your eyes close.

Poem Comments

(1)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

Katylove commented on desire-in progress 3-22-99

08-09-2009

I agree! Total Erotic~ great from beginning -to middle-to end..

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

kittman101’s Poems (84)

Title Comments
Title Comments
eyes of longing 11-12-14 0
The day draws near 11-12-14 652am 0
sharing your thought 11-11-14 0
the furthest distance 11-11-14 0
night dreams 1-4-15 0
dreams 1-3-15 0
open doors 1-5-15 0
missing moments 1-5-15 1013am 0
dawn of time 1-16-15 0
world of tomorrow 1-19-15 0
a friends mom passing 1-19-2015 0
seclusion 2-2-15 0
friends 2-2-15 0
one breath 7-11-15 0
conscious decision 1-27-15 0
the perfect stranger 1-5-15 0
opening my heart 7-7-15 0
closing my eyes 7-2-15 0
mezmerized 7-2-15 0
what do you want 7-5-15 0
reflection 7-5-15 0
the night 3-13-15 0
heart whispers 3-23-15 0
darkness swallows 6-8-2010 1
during the passion of night dec 10 2009 1
Do not say good by 8-3-09 1
Lady Bri (b-day)9-19-2
009
3
into the darkness 8-18-09 3
to fall or not to fall 8-4-09 5
death by stress 8-4-09 3
2-10-1999 southern comfort 3
1-26-99 the gift 1
1-25-1999 what i see in you 1
still birth 1-25-1999 3
1-23-1999 once 1
the devils plan 1-22-1999 1
nw beginning 1-22-1999 0
1-21-1999 lost 2 0
1-21-1999 lost 1 0
laura 1-18-1999 0
what really matters 1-11-1999 0
saving poem 1-11-1999 0
7-21-1998 Friend Crystal 0
sometimes 7-22-09 0
moonlight 2-28-1999 0
desire-in progress 3-22-99 1
seeing double 7-28-09 0
the portal 7-28-09 0
wrapping my arms around you 0
sweet memories 7-22-2009 3
long and short 1-14-08 0
life's puzzle 4-15-08 0
dream 1-14-2008 0
time stands still 7-13-09 1
all about you 6-13-08 0
a part of me 2-28-08 0
missing you 5-30-2008 1
elements 4-7-2008 0
eye of the beholder 4-2-2008 0
sonnet 2-10-08 0
embracing a sound 2-8-2008 0
the morning comes 2-28-2008 0
unique critique 3-4-2009 2
star re written2-10-0
8
0
dreams uncovered. 5-12-2009 0
truly blessed knowing you 2-24-2009 0
thoughts of men 2-25-2009 0
something just created june 15 2009 0
happy end june 15 2009 1
in ones arms 2-23-09 1
stealing a moment 3-27-09 1
rewind 3-25-09 0
brady the horserider 0
to my friend meagain 1
inspiration 0
passion 3
heartsblood 0
mouse in the house 0
night watchers 2
life in itelf 0
women 2
remember me 1
you 1
serenity 3