Disconnected Dots

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    • pocketofdreams6
    • If I speak in the tongues of men and angels, but have not love, I have become sounding brass or a tinkling symbol. And if I have prophecy and know all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have all faith so as to remove mountains, but have not love, I am nothing. And if I dole out all my goods, and if I deliver my body that I may boast but have not love, nothing I am profited. Love is long suffering, love is kind, it is not jealous, love does not boast, it is not inflated. It is not discourt

    Disconnected Dots

    Bright Shadows, these light bulbs are my suns, I rotate around them hiding from the one. A blatant disguise of hatred black, I wonder about the stars alive in blanket cracks. Disconnected emotionally infected, casting the clouds, cradling needles from the needless, weaving the evil from the blinds, closing the peep holes of my mind. This time, and time again, the leaflets of paper sliver through the seams shining silver rays mimicking diamond streams. These white lies are my sins, they do not spin around me, For I, around them. I am not the spider, but the insect in the web. Helpless to fate, I begin to stray away towards the dead to disintegrate.

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    frog commented on Disconnected Dots

    08-09-2009

    'Emotinally infected'...I loved the way you worded that. You have beautiful work.

    ginga commented on Disconnected Dots

    08-07-2009

    ok pocket when you speak in metaphors and riddles and every line reminds me of fragments and jigsaw puzzles, I know I am reading something more than ordinary. I hope you consider publishing and slam poetry...this shit is REAL! ginga

    AbysmalGoddess commented on Disconnected Dots

    05-22-2009

    the dots are a bit...disconnected. even with how random all these ideas are, they would only fit together with each other, and one ties them all together, it's the strangest thing. encore.

    pocketofdreams6

    05/27/2009

    Thankyou so much for complimenting my work, I have been so busy lately I did not realize I had received all of these lovely comments from you!

    pocketofdreams6

    05/27/2009

    Thankyou so much for complimenting my work, I have been so busy lately I did not realize I had received all of these lovely comments from you!

    ELRey commented on Disconnected Dots

    04-23-2009

    Bravo - A feast of images.

    beautifuldeath commented on Disconnected Dots

    03-14-2009

    I tried to pick just one certain line but i cannot for they are all perfect. Amazing write.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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