Do You Hear Me?

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    Do You Hear Me?

    i have been writing alot
    perplexed with all my thoughts
    time just triggeres my emotions again and again
    falling flowers with no scent
    "i am not alone- at least not today
    i have got the sun- an i have got my pain
    i can still smile for the others eyes
    and pretend faulsely that i am brave
    pace my feet through the circles
    as i collapse this raging maze:"
    i am not alone- i will always have my feelings- my hope and my words
    there is little left to desroy- when glitter isnt always gold
    i am writing- my way of thinking
    the only way my cause can be heard

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    Trailmixed commented on Do You Hear Me?

    01-01-2010

    As human animal beings, ultimately we have each other.. even when worse comes to worst. Flight n fightin ta stay alive till the sun stops and grows to our belligerent souls

    bforibus commented on Do You Hear Me?

    09-01-2009

    like a message in a bottle, just looking for a rescue. i know this emotion alll to well. thank you for showing that we can't be alone with this emotion.

    kittman101 commented on Do You Hear Me?

    08-27-2009

    your words are indeed unique. i see and feel so many emotions within the poem, i wanted to read it twice. because the emotions and images were a lot stronger and felt more deeply.i feel the pain of struggle. i feel this as though i was the one walking down the street, looking around walking no where just to be walking, smiling falsely at those whom pass by. knowing the pain inside is deep like a knife continually cutting.

    lustfulsoul commented on Do You Hear Me?

    08-20-2009

    A nice write. You are indeed a passionate poet. Good job.

    jferclark commented on Do You Hear Me?

    08-06-2009

    You are wounded, but far from dead. Find the positive -- helping others helps you. Stay up girl! Good write.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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