Do you see me?

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    • alexan
    • life is not a dream, people would say. I confused my reality with my dreams. Isan't that a bad thing? I don't really think so because deja vu really happens, its true

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    This is a poem of how my love was once lost.... I loved him dearly, but he couldn't see through my soul... I saw his.... Man whore.... lust for all the girls in his class.... I nearly cried...

    Do you see me?

    I used to go to the worst school in the lower,east,side
    I was there frome 1st to 5th
    I had liked a boy named Daneil
    He was the most popular boy in school

    We only talked to eachother alot in 2nd grade
    But when we got to 5th
    It was the worst
    Me and Daneil used to be like 1 person together

    Then it ended
    He was dating Michelle
    He didn't pay attention to me at all

    He would stare at me

    I would stare

    Then he glares

    I look away

    I thought I was in luv
    But he told me
    " I don't even know you so go away"

    I just turned and went to sit by myself over at the end of the table by myself from that day forward

    Only saying 4 words

    'do you see me?'
    'Do you  see me ?'
    'DO YOU SEE ME NOW'

    Then I got mad and became emo




    All.....Because......Of.......Just lovin an old best friend

    He had to be so mean to me

    All I did was love
    And I lost that many years ago

    do you love me
    do you like me
    do you want me
    "DO YOU SEE ME!!??"


    Daneil Decena

    I still Love You
    Do you see Me NOW!!

    I love you...<3

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    Chaos128 commented on Do you see me?

    07-23-2009

    Your most important job, Brookie, is to love yourself. I don't mean you should act like the sun rises and sets on you, but you've got to look at your life as a your life is a movie and in that movie, you've got to be the star. You can't let your opinion of yourself be decided by other people. Your poem is very touching.
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    alexan

    07/23/2009

    everything you say is soooo true....you have this gift

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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