don’t know if i can yell any louder

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    don’t know if i can yell any louder

    you just don't seem to understand
    what's coming out my mouth!
    i shout!
    and yell!
    and scream!
    but you just can't comprehend
    you are the only thing!
     
    your always on my mind!
    i'm determined to make this right!
    you're my best friend,
    and i am yours!
    but our friendship....
     it's crumbling beneath our feet!

    we are growing farther apart,
    it's just gone too far!
    with every inch apart we get,
    it tears a heartstring in my chest!

    i don’t care who you love!
    i don’t care who you hate!
    but please!
    find reason!
    find sense behind this mess!
    we weren’t meant to fight!
    we never wanted this!

    i'm not sure i can yell any louder...
     than i am right now!
    find me when you find hope!
    and let's make our mends
    .

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    randa commented on don’t know if i can yell any louder

    04-01-2014

    nice i remember feeling that way one point in time if u at least nice enough read my new one i got it is call MY NEW LIFE

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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