Don't Put On a Fake Smile

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  • Sadness
    • alexan
    • life is not a dream, people would say. I confused my reality with my dreams. Isan't that a bad thing? I don't really think so because deja vu really happens, its true

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    I got this Idea when I was watching Naruto. You know how Sakura Haruno always puts on her smile when Sasuke uchiha makes her sad...... yah soooo sakura always does that and sasuke always tells her off.

    Don't Put On a Fake Smile

     When your really hurt
    When your really quiet,when your usually load
    When your face looks wrong

    People ask," Whats the matter"
    You put on a fake smile, " I'm all right"
    But deep down your hurt
    Hurt by someone or something

    When your face is spattered with dried tears
    People will see
    They would care
    They would ask

    But you still wanna put a fake smile on your face
    And act like its nothing

    Whats the mtter with you
    Putting a fake smile on your face
    Just hurts you more then it really is

    Never, and I mean NEVER put a fake smile on your face

    Only if you wanna be a fake
    Then put a fake smile on your face

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    hdmac commented on Don't Put On a Fake Smile

    12-28-2009

    Interesting poem. I don't like anime cartoons, but that picture caught my attention. Did you do that artwork?
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    che234 commented on Don't Put On a Fake Smile

    07-23-2009

    Very touching and unique it has the element of truth, real feeling and above all care. Well done and keep it up.
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    alexan

    07/23/2009

    I GOT IT FROM NARUTO, sAKURA HARUNO

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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