Down Pour

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    Down Pour

    Down Pour



    Words unspoken
    will be our destruction
    communication never was our best thing...
    Now that these streets
    are deserted yet
    again I can
    play in the middle of the road
    in the down pour
    like I always wanted to
    I scream as
    the pelts hit and slide
    down my heated skin
    the corners of my
    mouth lift up
    as I twirl
    and shout at
    the ominous sky
    "I'm Alive!"
    now I lay in
    bed, so close
    yet so far
    your silence turns
    to coldness which
    turns to hurt
    as my mouth
    opens to shatter your
    fail safe
    I have never
    felt so alone
    while so close
    to somebody before
    I splay my fingers
    across your chest
    as I give your lips
    a soft goodbye
    and leave without
    a sound
    never to return again.
    ~Kaitlin Platti~

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    wheelsal commented on Down Pour

    06-26-2009

    Another good read. You are learning to use strong words. I'm impressed.

    Platti

    06/26/2009

    Why thank you! I'm glad that you enjoy my writing!

    StandingBear commented on Down Pour

    05-11-2009

    One way streets are just that, one way. Nice detour. Great write.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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