"Dream" Or "Nightmare"

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    I wrote this bcuz this is wut i think of life.

    "Dream" Or "Nightmare"

    Life is a dream to me,
    Sometimes my worst nightmare,
    And sometimes my first Reality.

    It starts with the first breath,
    To the first steps,
    Still a dream from beginning ... no ending seen Yet.

    Now speaking and walking,
    Still more to tell,
    Almost time to learn quite well.

    School here now friends insight,
    Subjects oh my,
    Like math, reading, science,
    And BOYS!

    To adults who have run this nightmare through,
    This seems unimportant though it is true,
    And stories ... ZZZ ... boring!

    Still living and breathing now the nightmare begins,
    For both the parents and yet the children,
    And yet we wish we were dead now time changes everything,
    Though it seems like a never ending Novel!

    Now the father buts in,
    When the dating begins,
    The daughter and son stay out late,
    This means they're ready to mate.

    Teenage years yet coming through,
    Change in the air,
    Now reality sets the fare.

    I still think of it as a dream,
    Or maybe even a nightmare,
    Shall I even Dare?

    As life keeps its trail,
    I don't want to sail,
     On... but to keep going is like my own
    Nightmare.

    I am still young,
    And growing strong,
    Trying to keep up with...,
    What I think is Modern Technology!

    This Nightmare or Dream is still,
    Growing around me!

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    EyesOfRain commented on "Dream" Or "Nightmare"

    09-24-2012

    Wow this is awesome! If your writing like this at 13 I can only imagine what you'll be writing in 10 years! I can well remember my teenage years of impatience and general anguish. Nice poem!

    poetryprincess

    09/24/2012

    Thx.... :) I love writting it's my expression of feelings!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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