Dreams of a Lazy Mind
Silently
My observer watches
Movements
Made by me
Squinting
Large green eyes
My observer dozes
Falls
Into deep slumber
Purring
She dreams happily
Lazily
For the world
Belongs
Completely to her
Dreams of a Lazy Mind
15 Comments
Tags: Other , Philosophy
- DestinedQueen
- The very long and tedious task of making up a portfolio is daunting!!!!!
Poem Commentary
This is the poem for the third weekly challenge that I fell behind on due to being busy. Finally had some time to crank it out and I'm sooo happy I did. I apologize to all that participated in this challenge for the late arrival.
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Poem Comments
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WolfLord commented on Dreams of a Lazy Mind
10-29-2009
- This is Awesome. The flow is perfect. The images are crisp. Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'',
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aliciagall commented on Dreams of a Lazy Mind
10-08-2009
- I like this. Simple like a thought that we can relate too.
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laydbak1 commented on Dreams of a Lazy Mind
08-08-2009
- Now, I liked this... No, I really like this.... You sucked me right in, with just a few choice words... My cat does the same thing.... Great write...
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Artie commented on Dreams of a Lazy Mind
08-02-2009
- Nice -I like this. Short & sweet, nice kitty lol - 10 from me
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daniel081180 commented on Dreams of a Lazy Mind
07-26-2009
- queen you always do a great job painting a picture no matter how short or long your poems are great job babe keep writing and i'll keep reading... :)
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