Drifting Into Calmness

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Drifting Into Calmness

My mind is drifting,
My thoughts are shifting.
What's this feeling?
Is my heart healing?
This calmness that has over come me....
Not once did I see....
For my horizon looked rough
and rigid,
My bones weak,
My body frigid,
No help for the weak...
No sounds for the meek....
"From where" I ask " Did this calmness arize"
"From within" a voice spoke with surprise!
You have finally found the balance
between luck and fate,
beauty and hate,
The difference in truth and right,
Like the shadows between day and night.
Go forth in the world
with your new learnings
because your mind might drift
and your thoughts might shift
but the calmness that has encased you
will lead you to happiness
and greater earnings

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DeepEclipse commented on Drifting Into Calmness

06-02-2010

I always thought that everything has balance. From the smallest blade of grass to the greatest building. Too much and you are overwhelmed. Too little and you starve. Maybe calmness IS that balance between the war of ourselves. Enjoyed the read.

Nicko7 commented on Drifting Into Calmness

02-20-2009

three times i have read this i get something different each time another fine piece of poetry

shugdaddy commented on Drifting Into Calmness

02-14-2009

lovely like your style you ccould tell that to your kids it very inspirational

Spacer commented on Drifting Into Calmness

02-13-2009

I liked the mellow Flow to this poem It was relzing almost like going somewhere else Loved that about it...

bforibus commented on Drifting Into Calmness

02-13-2009

mmmm. i loved this emotional poem. it was a tranquil breeze. that blew southeast. and i loved it

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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