Drivers Ed.

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    Drivers Ed.

    They say life is like a two lane street.
    Honey-- Listen.
    It's a fifteen lane highway.
    Every direction,
    every idea,
    constantly colliding,
    without insurance.

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    mbryant53 commented on Drivers Ed.

    12-08-2009

    I see you use very little words but speak in volumes. Bravo!

    Hanna commented on Drivers Ed.

    07-07-2009

    how concisely you can pinpoint the meaning of concepts that are so difficult ( life, spirituality- I am sure there is more) with words so few. The power you give to simple terms is amazing

    phoenixhope commented on Drivers Ed.

    05-31-2009

    Very true! It's just how it is... some collisions are deadly, some are just to wake you up, others are just too cautious it leads them to more disaster...

    lightcourier commented on Drivers Ed.

    05-04-2009

    Excellent work, but then I like richard brautigan. This was very poignant and very funny. It might not meet the five rules for passing a poetic license, but it is an excellent piece of work. Thanks!

    mspoetris

    05/30/2009

    what is a poetic license? Poets are free-in a way.thank you for reading. I won't pay.I love a good protest!

    FoF commented on Drivers Ed.

    03-19-2009

    A so-so poem in itself - but what a great jumping off point. I feel like this most of time. Write it.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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