Dusk

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    Dusk

    When left with Nothing but Time.
    You Rarely Stood Out of my Mind.

    But I can't Make your Love Shine.

    A Dart on my spine, Your love relieved me of my rights.
    And I did Nothing to Fight, You devoured my light

    Left in Dusk, with only traces of my shine.
    I never realized All I declined

    I can't love here tonight.

    It's Time I free ourselves right.
    Results of a world Concealing Light.

    I dare to move one more step,knowing I'd lose my worst and best.
    I can't stand in regrets, I must ignore all the rest.

    So I could be free to love tonight.

    Now it's Time I clench of all of my goodbye's
    As I won't be back to leave reply's

    Dusk is all Mine.




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    mamasan commented on Dusk

    10-04-2009

    Deep thoughts for sure and it is your right to explore all that life has to offer. But, the truth be known that you are the master of your destiny. Keep your eyes open and your mind opened wide; and I am sure you will get the hang of what this journey is all about. Lots of luck to you and may you find happiness which is the real gift. Bless you.
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    dahlusion commented on Dusk

    10-01-2009

    This is a beautiful poem of one 's understanding of wants and needs. Lovely!!
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    Spacer

    10/04/2009

    Tnanks for for the feedback...[=

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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