Earth Love

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I experienced this last night while staring at the moon.

Earth Love

 

Earth Love

Come with me to a place in our mind

Where moonbeams drip in perfect rhyme

Feel your heartbeat slow, troubles decline

The rhyme of living out of time

 

Place your cheek upon the ground

Near a clear, deep, pool, there’s not a sound

Touch our Mother's treasures, intimately now

Sense her as she calms you down

 

Stroke her textures all around

Drink her knowledge as it abounds

As moon showers sprinkle over your crown

Let her rock you safely down

 

Gentle are her giant arms

Quieting all foreboding storms

You are accepted and you are loved

Experience peace from up above

 

Pull her closely to your heart

Lock in her love and bond a new start

Earth in all her harmony

Quiets all creatures in unanimity

 

-M. Jacobs

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sevyn7 commented on Earth Love

01-13-2011

This poem makes me want to go out, and lay on the beach, and just bask in the ambiance ot the earth's beauty, very beautifully written.

danmartyjake1

01/13/2011

Thanks for that- I wrote it to conjour up those thoughts, in a matter of speaking- sort of an ode to Earth, you know. Thanks Again.

SavVySam commented on Earth Love

01-21-2010

I certainly agree with Charles52 comments! lol;) Only adding my own kudos for the beautifully graceful work!

danmartyjake1

01/21/2010

Thanks Charles, so much, so great to hear from you on "Earth Love".

charles52 commented on Earth Love

01-20-2010

Marion: Well-done, beautifully written in a stlye all your own. Only a woman could write such a peom of beauty. Great job. Charles

danmartyjake1

01/21/2010

Your kind comments and thoughts are greatly appreciated

knight4696 commented on Earth Love

01-13-2010

Marion! Wow - I really love this one! You are an amazing writer! And you never cease to amaze! :) Ken

danmartyjake1

01/14/2010

Ken, So glad you resonated with "Earth Love". I appreciate you reading it and responding.

calliope commented on Earth Love

01-07-2010

See now i feel stupid for my comment on spirit body,cause by this poem you obviously know how to structure your poetry,this is awesome and powerful and the structure helps the reader to appreciate it,your poetry will go over with readers better when it is structured and not like a paragraph,really this is wonderfully written and your very talented,Brava!

danmartyjake1

01/07/2010

Oh yeah, that's a glitch in the new site changes. I have 2 on here like that. I reported it. But you cannot change it. I tried reloading it twice.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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