Ecstasy

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    Ecstasy

    Ecstasy

     

    There’s a revolution in our bed

    The highest high is in our head

    Warrior, stir me from within

    Lift me, send me, let heaven begin

     

    Force upon me your delight

    Elation overcomes, hear my sighs

    Wrenching of desire, ecstacy ascend

    Take me to your pleasure den

     

    Pledge your love to me devout

    Leave no query, erase my doubt

    Quicken, breathe upon skin

    Let me feel your rhythm again

     

    Elements of rapture

    Put me in your trance

    Steal my kiss

     under covers we dance

     

    Angels soar to cry and moan

    You and I divine, alone.


    -M. Jacobs 

     

     

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    angelchaser commented on Ecstasy

    08-16-2010

    WOW^^. This is wonderful. Erotic and sensual, yet a little naughty:). you've done a great job of putting sensual and sexual thoughts into my head without being in any way vulgar or obscene. This is a poem to read to a lover, before.....maybe even during lovemaking^^. 10 from me. Wanna be friends?
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    danmartyjake1

    09/13/2010

    Many thanks for that lovely comment on Ecstasy, I tend to think of sex and love as a spiritual high and often get turned off if it becomes raunchy. So it makes sense that my poems would come across that way. I am grateful for your words of encouragement and strength. Of course, we can be friends.

    MarionYost commented on Ecstasy

    01-19-2010

    Wow. This isn't usually my kind of poem, but it's written so well. I love the flow, the message it sends... Great write. All the best -Marion-
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    danmartyjake1

    01/19/2010

    Marion, Glad you were able to read it and so thankful for your message back..

    orsonav commented on Ecstasy

    12-27-2009

    This is a very passionate piece. You should try your hand at writing romance novels.
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    danmartyjake1

    12/27/2009

    Thanks, I have many journals put away. I suppose, I could whip up something or put them together one day. I think there are many stories in there... Not enough time to develop all of them, maybe, just maybe one day there will be. I appreciate your support here on OP.

    Artie commented on Ecstasy

    12-16-2009

    Nice write -- A nice eye opener this morning - you capture passion well
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    danmartyjake1

    12/21/2009

    Artie, where you been lately? I missed you. Thanks for the kind words on Ecstasy.

    jademelissa74 commented on Ecstasy

    12-16-2009

    A wonderful, passionate piece. You have crafted an erotic piece that exposes the eloquence of a true woman. Great write!
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    danmartyjake1

    12/21/2009

    So glad you liked it. I appreciate your perspective.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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