Eden
Life began in a garden,
Or, so the story goes
Then, we met a slithering snake,
And, thus began our woes
MDA
Or, so the story goes
Then, we met a slithering snake,
And, thus began our woes
MDA
Eden
6 Comments
Tags: Religion
- Mandi
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10-27-2009
- for as long as it took me to get to this poem. i do wish it was longer. it had a humorous undertone to it, for a serious situation that may or may not be true. excellent job on this. it had to take a discpline to stop at four lines.
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11/02/2009
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10-11-2009
- I like this one factual ,direct, finalized. I will read more Thank you
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11/02/2009
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queenrosered commented on Eden
10-10-2009
- WOW Mandi! LOL! Short, sweet and right to the point, huh? I loved the rhyme and the subject. The last line was the most brilliant! "And thus began our woes", indeed! Thanks so much! Love, Rose! (queenrosered) :)
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11/02/2009
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HarverTomsson commented on Eden
08-31-2009
- I'm looking for the Burma Shave sign next.........
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07-27-2009
- Short, sweet and to the point. Sometimes things are just that simple great write
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01/04/2010
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