Emotions in a lovelife

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    Sorry about the form, also there is no rhyme, too many words, would have taken too much time.  This says it all in the order it happened.  Hope you can relate.

    Emotions in a lovelife

     Attraction
    touching
    passion
    loving
    unacceptance
    elope
    ring
    trust
    distance
    rape
    deceit
    lie
    disappointment
    acomplishments
    cooperation
    elation
    graduation
    pain
    joy
    insane
    warm
    lust
    hot
    anger
    reunite
    losses
    resentments
    exiled
    judged
    surviving
    depressions
    growth
    existence
    numbness
    obligation
    despiration
    dope
    hope
    fear
    doubt
    thats what
     it's been
       all about!

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    oldaubry commented on Emotions in a lovelife

    10-11-2009

    wow, this sounded like a volatile relationship, there's too much of that going in it seems. I really like the free- form verse, like a stream of consciousness and ended by a single rhyme. It adds an impact
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    Tempestlady

    10/14/2009

    The emotions just needed out, this one was just a therapeutic release i think for me. Glad you liked it.

    StandingBear commented on Emotions in a lovelife

    08-20-2009

    Still a nicely written, creative work no matter the rhyme or form. Good job!
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    Tempestlady

    08/23/2009

    Thanks as always, your comments make me think.

    laydbak1 commented on Emotions in a lovelife

    08-10-2009

    Wow, what an exhausting and vibrant journey through far reaching single words... This read is like opening a can of life... Great job...
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    Tempestlady

    08/10/2009

    I know it's a hard read. Just full of emotions that day i guess. ty

    Vincent commented on Emotions in a lovelife

    08-08-2009

    You are a thinker, some would say a day dreamer, your imagination runneth wild, I read your poem and it made me smile, Life and love, love ang life, all you have said
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    Vincent

    08/08/2009

    has been right smiles Vincent

    Tempestlady

    08/10/2009

    Thanks, glad you liked it. Write on

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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