Emotions

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    Emotions

    As I hold back the tears
    I feel like I'm choking
    The pressure has been building on me
    In a matter of time, I'm bound to snap

    Why do people have to be so mean to me?
    They don't care that I have very delicate emotions
    I cry when I'd had too much
    And scream when the pressure's on

    I feel I'm doing something wrong
    Always looking over my shoulder
    I feel like I'm being watched
    Just waiting until I mess up

    So very cruel; stupid world I'm in
    I can't hold in my emotions anymore
    I can't remain calm as I always have
    I just need a stress-relief and soon!

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    keithrberryjr commented on Emotions

    08-02-2009

    Writing poetry about your emotions is a great way to let them out.It is a quick release of the stress because you are doing something you enjoy.Writing.I really enjoyed the poem because I could feel the emotion that was put into it.Great Job.

    optimistic commented on Emotions

    06-29-2009

    This world is cruel so many mixed emotions on the phone and the internet is how we connect with them now a days. This is a great poem things will change just stand up and cry.

    Louise commented on Emotions

    06-29-2009

    Thanks for sharing your emotions. You're human and have emotions. It is better to cry and let it go than to keep it bottled up side. You are young and will grow as you get older. Hang in there.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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