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Seeing things the way most people don't.
Hearing things with an objective ear.
Why does it matter if things don't go the
way you expect?
If God wanted life to be easy, then He
would have made us all perfect.

Who is the person to make you understand?
Is it your mother, father,
teacher, the President? Or is it simply
you? The self-awareness that comes 
knowing life's toils and pains are here to stay,
no matter what you say or do to stop them.

In every aspect, there proves to be some
type of non-cohesive agent that will
help things fall apart.
Pleasure and pain, joy and sorrow,
love and hate; these are the things that make
us all wish that we could have a do-over.

Working on creating a new personality 
is as easy as trying to pull a tooth
from a sleeping lion.
Most people can't see that the anger that
is your only saviour cannot be simply
squashed like the everyday beetle underfoot.

In the days before death, there always seems to
be an effervescent flow of visions and 
nuances that no one else sees.
 We are taught that there is life beyond this
world, but do we really choose to believe it?
Only on our death-bed can we see the light.

Hard choices, easy solutions, everyday bullshit;
this is life in general for most of mankind,
though it's hard for some to deal.
What choices do we need to make to step up
our game and live life to the fullest without
worrying about the repurcussions?

Poor, innocent, unwanted, destitute;
this is the way we look at life when it becomes
to hard to deal with.
When is it okay to just sit back and watch life go
by as we rest on our laurels and take another
sip from the snifter?

All mankind will have to eventually
find some recourse from the hell that we
have wrought on ourselves.
For some, it will be the hard choices,
for others, the easy solutions, but for
 the rest of us it is just everyday bullshit.



B Heath Harris/(c) 2010 

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ApaqRasgirl commented on Enter name here:

08-14-2010

terrific write dear and so well said.....I loved the rhythm and flow in this piece.....and it makes such a profound statement of truth.....great read dear......thanks.....as always loves ya asha

raziel69

08/14/2010

thanks again, Asha

Angelface commented on Enter name here:

08-12-2010

Thats just the way life is! We have to learn to accept the things we can't change and the things we can change in life,be grate ful for that chance! This write was exceptional I really enjoyed the read! Your truly blessed with a gift of words in writing! May you have a very blessed journey, Angelface

raziel69

08/13/2010

i am grateful for your comments and look forward to reading your work as well. thanks for the priase...Raziel

Artie commented on Enter name here:

08-04-2010

The things you say in this piece, I can relate to so well. I want to believe that all questions have answers, and we are truly in control of our lives. But sometimes, that is the problem. 10 from me

raziel69

08/04/2010

sometimes i just have to sit down and vomit my feelings in a way i hope some people will understand, and i am glad that you can do so, my friend. thanks for the praise, it is much appreciated...

Rhymer commented on Enter name here:

08-02-2010

Life can be a struggle, life can be a joy, and life can be filled with bullshit. The test is how we handle or fall what lies in front of us. Rains on the just and unjust the same. Excellent write and an excellent read.

raziel69

08/04/2010

thanks, Rhymer, i much appreciate your comment.

SavVySam commented on Enter name here:

08-02-2010

Wow...the prospect of actually having a "do over" can you imagine how long that line would be??? Good write!

raziel69

08/04/2010

if given a "do over" in life, i would change soooo many things, but that is life and that is how God wants us to live it. thanks, Sam...

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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