Escape

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    first assignment for creative writing class :)

    Escape

    Sitting all alone,

    on a stretch of beige rounded grains.

    Digging your feet into the smooth sands.

    Sea salt,

    swept by the wind,

    lands delicately on your face.

    Lapping waves

    caress your ears

    like a baby's lullaby.

    The taste of the infinite ocean

    sits in your mouth,

    tempting you to assimilate.

    As the sun sets,

    the moon chases it down,

    and the blue and orange shimmering water

    transforms into a vibrating sea of black and white.

    Close your eyes on the sight,

    let your mind wander,

    and melt into the nothingness;

    for the end approaches,

    and all will soon change.

    ~Anthony Taylor~

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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Tony’s Poems (79)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Escape 0
    Simplicity 1
    Unser Leben....Our Life 0
    Nie...Never 0
    Freedom 0
    Recoil 0
    Du & Me 0
    Lass Uns Rennen....Let Us Run 0
    Menschen...Hu
    mans
    0
    Wiederholung.
    ..Repitition
    0
    Balance 0
    Finality 1
    Zusammen...To
    gether
    0
    Für Dich....For You 1
    Mein Geist....My Mind 0
    Uns.....Us 0
    Fall......Fal
    l
    0
    Falschen Anschuldigung
    en...False Accusations
    0
    Sicherheit...
    Safety
    0
    Brech Aus...Break Out 0
    Shadow 0
    Cold 0
    Certitude 0
    Truth 0
    Consciousness 0
    Sacrifice 0
    Two Become One 0
    Sleep 0
    Broken 1
    Punishment 0
    Reality 0
    Warranted Infliction 0
    Sky 1
    Solitude 0
    Future 0
    Lies 0
    Rules 1
    Unavoidable 0
    Empty 0
    Maze 0
    Alone 0
    Sporadic 0
    Struggle 0
    Impossible 0
    Ambush 0
    Life's Song 0
    Geh....Go 0
    Nicht Mehr.......No More 0
    "Gods" 1
    Wonders 0
    Das Ende.....The End 0
    Vengance 0
    Obstacle 0
    Gone 0
    Ewigkeit....E
    ternity
    0
    Release 0
    Hidden 2
    Incapable 1
    Breakdown 1
    Guardian Soldiers 1
    One Who Once Was 0
    Creative Process 0
    What Am I? 1
    The Overpowering Desire 5
    Spirit 1
    Insanity 2
    Constantly 1
    Present Existence 5
    Pain Inside 1
    Liebe.... Love 1
    Banning Books 3
    Iron Man 0
    What You Do 2
    Someone 9
    IDK 6
    Deprivation 12
    In Return 3
    Identity 3
    It 5