ever loving you
before the morning's misty eyecan penetrate the budding sky
with starlit streams from yesternigh
I kiss the softness of your sigh
ever loving you
23 Comments
Tags: Love
can penetrate the budding sky
with starlit streams from yesternigh
I kiss the softness of your sigh
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angel33614 commented on ever loving you
06-14-2010
- Sometimes the most meaningful and complex of things can be held in the smallest of packages. Your poem is a perfect representation of this notion, short and sweet but dripping emotion! A beautiful potrayal of lost love remebered with the sweetness of a kiss. A Beautiful, poetic flower that comes into blood in the starlight of the night as the gentle rays of the moon caresses the soul. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel
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WordSlinger commented on ever loving you
06-07-2010
- Springieieie, this is short, and as large, as BP's bills now, ty WS
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Charlie23 commented on ever loving you
04-05-2010
- Even your short pieces are very thought provoking. I like this one a lot!
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lunamarie commented on ever loving you
03-31-2010
- ooooohhh ... is this love or what?! ............ Luna
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QueenotheKnight commented on ever loving you
03-30-2010
- cute, short and sweet! :).......... thanks for sharing! ;)
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04/19/2010
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