Everyones Dirty Little Secret

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Everyones Dirty Little Secret

She's everyones dirty little secret,
The one they call in the middle of the night;
The one they spill there secrets to when no one else will listen.
She's the one who will always come through
Because she is desperatly looking for love.
She just wants to find the one she needs to make her whole,
Maybe tonight she'll finally find him by answering your call.
But how can anyone love her when she cant even love herself?
She is everyones dirty little secret.
But no one knows she has a secret of her own,
One she holds tight inside herself.
She's craving the love that she lost,
The love she cant live without.
Until she finds that again...
She will keep comming when you call in the night,
She will keep getting hurt pleasing others.
Shes EVERYONES dirty little secret..... and no one knows..

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cousinsoren commented on Everyones Dirty Little Secret

01-17-2011

Diction perfect......rhythm and metre excellent. Development of theme very, very good. General appearance in free blank verse excellent. Theme treatment, in the whole masterly/ Poem needs editing for instances of incorrect spelling in a few lines. My rating for general satisfaction and audience effect is 10.

cousinsoren commented on Everyones Dirty Little Secret

01-17-2011

Excellent! Superb ! I suggest you re-enter this poem in the Contest. It's a winner, win or not! My rating is 10x10 +

tenderpoison commented on Everyones Dirty Little Secret

07-24-2009

it's sad how we sometimes don't understand that we are only worth what we think we are...very well written, and an intriguing choice of topic. 10

jmschwartz commented on Everyones Dirty Little Secret

07-14-2009

love this. exactly as your profile said, issues that noone wants to talk about. love the way you show how females are always looking for something that they have lost. it seems as if all of us have lost something that we will remain to look for. and the photo fits perfectly. love the idea that you put a pic with all poems, my second passion is photography. it's nice to see that i am not the only napkin writer that loves photography. keep up the beautiful writing.

Sydney commented on Everyones Dirty Little Secret

06-19-2009

wow. this reminds me so many things back at home. this is great. thnx for reminding me for that.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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