Fade to White

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Fade to White


Daydreaming through memories I search for you
my journey takes me to waters of blue,
Your reflection shimmers, on the lake of my mind,
Unbroken by ripples, shed from the oars of time
Strong was our love, but in the end it was feigned,
Soon came a wind, pursued by the rain
just but a hint of your reflection remains,
washed away by the rains, and tides of distain
baptizing my memory of the trace of your face,
Just then, crashing thunder, and lightening a blaze
shining light on a memory, the day you left me in scorn,
confused, alone, and somewhat forlorn
All traces of you are fading to white,
these words I recite were not meant in spite,
I've been released from the grasp of your ghost on this night
No longer for the past will my heart mourn,
As I open my eyes, I wince at the light
A passion for love, in my heart now reborn,
with this new freedom, I smile in delight



















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optimistic commented on Fade to White

12-07-2010

Simple poem that I really enjoy. it rhymes smoothly bringing the soul to Uphoria.

Marsink commented on Fade to White

09-11-2010

I was delighted to read the reverie of love's past and new day, ahead. A very smooth waltz of hand-picked boquet of phrases: you have declared skillfully your heart's experience! Applause!

Merlyn commented on Fade to White

06-26-2010

Wonderful. Welcome back to the light. Hope you weren't gone too long. Love'd the flow. Very picturesque. Truelly talented my friend. PS... Burn one for me.

blueberry commented on Fade to White

06-22-2010

I really like this poem of yours. But the ending is indeed my favorite!

SuSpence

06/23/2010

Thank you, I like the positive ending as well, hope for the future right :) ~Spence

SuperChick76 commented on Fade to White

05-29-2010

I love how you start with such sorrow, but end in a smile. Nicely done. There is truth here. The imagery of the storm was perfectly timed to the moments of life, "Just then, crashing thunder, and lightening a blaze//shining light on a memory, the day you left me in scorn" Perfect. Brilliant, my friend, I absolutely loved it.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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