fall

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fall

I painted fate, to satiate
the Eastern mer, 
stars decor 
as demons bore
visions lost 
were her.   

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angel33614 commented on fall

09-06-2010

Short sweet but speaks volumes of your heart's keep, lost love never found, the broken heart the only sound, bravo my new friend! You have painted a perfect picture of pain and torment that a novel would surely far short. I love the line, "I painted fate, to satiate", as I have often barged through the gates of hell on my quest to tempt fate, been there and done that, more times than I would like top admit. Perhaps I see, perhaps I am blind. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! with grace and humility ANGEL

BrittKun commented on fall

08-26-2010

very good short and to the point!!! The flow was very good But I feel there could be more. 9 from me

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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