Falling

4 Comments

Tags:
  • Life

    Falling

    Falling

     

    Dreams decay

    As life floats away

     

    Expectations I try to exceed

    To no expediency

     

    Why do I try so hard?

    And all I do is fall

    I fall

    Fall from grace

    As tears burn my face

    Falling fast

    There’s no turning back

    Falling hard

    When I try to be strong

    Falling along

    Trying to hold on

     

    When the tears burn

    When my eyes are red

    Trying so hard not to be sad

    Falling Away

    Poem Comments

    (4)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Falling

    08-26-2010

    that was great dear, and like WS said, we all fall sometimes, but we must get back up and keep going less we cease to exist, let those emotions sail free in the words of your poetry and you will not be falling anymore for you will have succeeded in doing something great, something that will out last your own life, words written are permanent markers for our lives.....wonderful poem dear........love asha

    BrittKun

    08/26/2010

    Thanks Asha From Britt

    WordSlinger commented on Falling

    08-14-2010

    We all fall sometimes, but guess what you have poetry to pick you up, ty WS

    Rhymer commented on Falling

    08-12-2010

    An excellent write, sad in a way but with such vivid feelings on display the reader feels every word. 10

    BrittKun

    08/13/2010

    thanks

    Teardrops commented on Falling

    08-12-2010

    This is sad but in another way beautiful .you take me under your wing with words and show me how sad you are love this my friend . Marie

    BrittKun

    08/12/2010

    it was just a feeling after i graduated. Feeling eventually go away.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

    Unknown Source

    BrittKun’s Poems (60)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Heart Hurts 0
    Reflection 1
    Flower 1
    My Sun 0
    Fragile Beauty 0
    Dark whispers 0
    Primal fear 0
    Snow Angel 0
    Can't Get Clean 0
    Put My Gloves Away 0
    Smoldering Flames 0
    Cold here 0
    Beauty Crumbles 0
    Beastly Beauty 0
    Untiled1 0
    Untiled 0
    Fire 0
    You 0
    Static Noise 0
    Burn 1
    Void Love 0
    Black Heart 0
    Stone 0
    clouds 0
    Rain Kisses 1
    illusion of Wealth 0
    re wrote The Reaper 0
    The Mental Hospital 0
    Elements 0
    Who am I? 0
    I can’t believe you’re gone 0
    Haiku #3 3
    Haiku #2 2
    Haiku #1 2
    Stripped 7
    Mother Dear 6
    Tissues 3
    Mom 9
    Peace 3
    Falling 4
    The clock is ticking 3
    the river 15
    Spotlight 5
    Stromy Day 4
    Lifeless 6
    Alone 7
    Numb 4
    Bulimic 3
    The place 5
    Scarred 3
    My Metropolis 3
    My Hope 4
    Why 2
    The reaper 4
    myth 4
    I remember 5
    The morning 3
    Whispers 9
    Feelings of love 3
    Animalistic 4