Family Love

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  • My Hopes And Dreams For O

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    OLD ONE lol

    Family Love
    Love is a cottage,
    Outside of town,
    With a warm fire,
    Children and happiness,
    All around,
    With a gorgeous river,
    Running a ground,
    With beautiful endless woods,
    All around,
    With graceful horses,
    Running tamely free,
    All is as happy as can be,

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    graceladymn commented on Family Love

    09-21-2009

    Warm gentle dream Ray, it brings a feeling of serenity.
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    photochick commented on Family Love

    08-26-2009

    Short sweet and nice flow and imagery painted a greta pic in a few lines thanks for sharing
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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