F.E.A.R

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    F.E.A.R

    A storm in my head, it never stops pourin

    All day sitting on my bed, gets real borin

    Loneliness plays a part in my life,

    FEAR, I’ll never make a wife

    So what’s up? What’s my deal?

    These are just F.alse E.motions A.ppearing R.eal.

    A storm in my head, it’s getting cloudy,

    Everything’s a blur, is Daddy proud of me?

     I hide all my thoughts by bein a clown,

    FEAR, I’ll let my father down.

    So what will it take for me to heal?

    These are just F.alse E.motions A.ppearing R.eal.

    A storm in my head, no sunshine for me

    When will my time to go be?

    I want to be here, to take a fresh breath

    FEAR, I’ll have to go through death,

    Will this here be my last meal?

    These are just F.alse E.motions A.ppearing R.eal.

    A storm in my head, but I must strong.

    I’m an umbrella, this storm is wrong,

    I protect myself, fight it hardcore,

    Fear, I have no fear no more.

    My thoughts are an orange, and I’m the peel,

    These are just F.alse E.motions A.ppearing R.eal.

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    gypsyf8 commented on F.E.A.R

    02-09-2011

    love this . . . . "the storms in my head" . . . . the weather of the mind can be quite stormy at times . . . we are fortunate that we are often blessed with rainbows afterwards . . . . great write . . . .
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    MarionYost commented on F.E.A.R

    10-26-2010

    I'll Give this a 10 just for the creativeness & Originality in this piece. Great write. good for realization. Awesome piece. All the best -Marion-
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    arronpalmer commented on F.E.A.R

    10-20-2010

    Very, very clever Shannen. Really got into this, you have a lovely turn of phrase. I think you might like Ian Brown's F.E.A.R. Check it out.
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    Chaos128 commented on F.E.A.R

    09-02-2010

    Cleverly composed with a real message concerning the doubts we all have to face, eventually. Nicely done.
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    CdeM commented on F.E.A.R

    08-07-2010

    so many well done metaphors.... If fear is the anecdote, what's the provocative player? I get it, but fear and all things mindset are for you and you alone... well done none the less...
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