February 24, 2011, 11:59 PM
And I realized,
That I had killed an innocent man,
When I had pulled the trigger,
Killing myself.
That I had killed an innocent man,
When I had pulled the trigger,
Killing myself.
February 24, 2011, 11:59 PM
4 Comments
Tags: Dark Poetry , Death
- ManOnTheMoon
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Artie commented on February 24, 2011, 11:59 PM
06-15-2011
- Very good. The cycle is shown so well here. You remember that old camera commercial sloagan, ''So advanced it's simple'' well that's what this is - 10 from me
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Phission commented on February 24, 2011, 11:59 PM
04-12-2011
- i wish i had written this ! when another "poet" says that about a poem he has just absorbed, i feel this to be one the greatest compliments. 10
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labitch commented on February 24, 2011, 11:59 PM
03-19-2011
- profound, yet simplistic.........................i like it!!!!!
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brokenhearted11 commented on February 24, 2011, 11:59 PM
03-01-2011
- That is the greatest thought for that second when it's too late. It's succinct, plenty shorter than anything I've read lately, but a good poem. Keep writing!
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