Fell To You

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    Fell To You

    Fueled by deceit, the blade was driven in.
    I had nothing to lose and you twisted the pain.
    You faked your obliviousness to my exploitation.
    You had everything to gain.

    You tried to save me for your rainy day
    And proceeded with your routine.
    I forged a counterfeit smile from my shelf
    Despite unraveling at the seams.

    Puppet strings dangled from your hands.
    I tried to see things from your view.
    My empathy was your ammunition,
    And stumbling, I fell to you.

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    dragonheart1 commented on Fell To You

    06-28-2009

    Love can be lust where one falls into a trap of being a puppet But is it worth it to live as a slave to someone you dont love? Cut the strngs.This poems message however, is a great one...Fake love creates misery.

    kenparme commented on Fell To You

    03-22-2009

    Very well written-attention holding and active with emotion.

    WordSlinger commented on Fell To You

    03-20-2009

    My Fav, nice poem

    samuelj commented on Fell To You

    03-03-2009

    NICE SHORT STRAIGHT...LOVE THE WAY YOU PUT IT ALL TOGETHER

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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