Fields of Jasmine


Fields of Jasmine

Fields of Jasmine

In fields of jasmine, the sun did shine, as I was his and he was mine.

Transfixed in other worlds we climb, still, I am my lover's and he is mine.
In grasses deep, beneath bended tree, I belong to my lover and he to me.

Beside a stream, upon a hill, I am belonging to him, still.

Love so deeply there did swell and only thoughts of him did quell.
In sight of billowy clouds above, I find as well my lover’s love.

What place can anyone find, where my love is not his and his love is not mine?

No place is safety that I abide, except within my lover’s mind.
Now gaze upon a rumbling sea, again my lover, he would be.

In thoughts and subjects beyond time, still there each other we would find.

To the ends of infinity and back to thee, my love, is always within me.
No thing or substance can unbind, embrace my lover and entwine.

At one we are with all that is, forever more, He’s mine, I’m his.


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victoriandoll commented on Fields of Jasmine


i love how each line will end in the same " i am his and he is mine " truly beautiful.



This is one of the first poems I posted here. I appreciate you commenting on it. No one has in a while.

SavVySam commented on Fields of Jasmine


I randomly selected this particular write to enjoy...ENJOY I did!!! You've captured a sort of Shakespearean feel in this piece...Such classic beauty here! Straight to my fav's;)



Savvy, Thanks ever so much. That was one of the first ones that I posted on this site. Thanks for reading it and your lovely comment. It's nice to see the older ones pop up from time to time. Much Appreciated! ;-)

BringMeBullets commented on Fields of Jasmine


What a wonderful write. This says everything that hearts cannot. You have talent, and you show it. Thank you for sharing. I am saving this to my favorites. :)



Cool. Thanks so much.

BadBadBear commented on Fields of Jasmine


An exquisitely written love poem that will certainly stand the test of time! Wonderful!



Bear, Thanks for reading it and your kind words.

stellar commented on Fields of Jasmine


A so sweet a poem..reminds me mo of the poem "Come to me and be my love"...^_^ v



Thanks Stellar, I will check that one out.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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