FINE

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    FINE

     YOU ARE SO FINE.

    I'M GLAD THAT YOUR MINE.

    I WALK THIS LIFE WITH YOU.

    GLAD I AM TO BE THE WIFE OF YOU.

    YOU ARE SO FINE.

    WHAT I LOVE ABOUT YOU THE MOST IS THAT YOU ARE SO KIND.

    TO ME YOU ARE THE RAREST FIND.

    ON THAT PAPER I WILL LOVINGLY CO-SIGN.

    BECAUSE YOU MY LOVE, YOU ARE SO FINE.

    TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY

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    shakeme4life commented on FINE

    10-17-2010

    optimistic , is what this poem makes me , it made me thirsty ...lol for more
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    smoothdame commented on FINE

    10-13-2010

    Beautifully put well defined. This poem gives hope to those who are still in search of the perfect one for them. "To me you are the rarest find" this is the line that meant the most to me because it in my opinion has the most meaning. great job.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/13/2010

    There is always hope. Thank you so much for your expressions and feedback...........E

    Tyme commented on FINE

    10-12-2010

    "ON THAT PAPER I WILL LOVINGLY CO-SIGN"Co-signing your name is definately a trust issue. No more "I" and "me", now it's "us" and "we". (WOOO-HOOO!) I think this is the best line in the poem to me.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/13/2010

    LOL.... I love the way you express your self. Thanks for your comments. The basis of any good relationship is trust.....E

    Kanicki commented on FINE

    10-12-2010

    Nicely written thanks for sharing the love. peace and light
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/13/2010

    Your welcome. Thank you for reading and commenting.....E

    ApaqRasgirl commented on FINE

    10-12-2010

    that was very sweet and passionate.....a wonderful write for the one you love.......thanks for sharing........love asha
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/12/2010

    Thank you Asha. I really appreciate your feedback..........E

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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