Flames of Love

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    Flames of Love

    Laconic moon hides behind

    strip of gray clouds, unwind

    dull brightness combined

    ludic shadow n‘ maiden’s mind

     

    foot steps on d’ prowl

    knees n’ palms on d’ crawl

    twin heads began to howl

    eyes like granite bowl

     

    lovers’ laugh n’ d’ dark

    together as if singin’ larks

    a maiden on grassy park

    sweet talkin’ like dog’s bark

     

    tree trunks a warmin’

    body’s entwines a comin’

    fingers rubbin’ a runnin’

    flames of love a burnin’

     

    pinky tits rigid n’ achin’

    tremulous lips a lickin’

    pantin’ airbags a suckin’

    flames of love a cookin’

     

    a maiden yells n’ d night

    tommy hurrumps like a knight

    restin’ limbs an’ alights

    ‘til d’ last of flame of love bites…

    no more(whisper)

     

             ---the end---

     

     

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    complicatedmind commented on Flames of Love

    08-10-2009

    beautifully written--so descriptive .You're a good writer.

    nhorlandi

    08/10/2009

    thanks, mate appreciate it. You too a good one, just reviewed a couple of yours. thanks again.

    Indigogreen16 commented on Flames of Love

    07-31-2009

    Absolutely Beautiful. A very well written and passionate poem. Thank you.

    nhorlandi

    08/03/2009

    Thanks pal, I'll return the favor

    optimistic commented on Flames of Love

    07-17-2009

    Very descriptive power, forceful words that run across the page when will the flame blow out intersting style of writting I really like the ending.

    nhorlandi

    07/19/2009

    Thank you sir, though there is an error in the last line -'til the last(of) flame of love bites... I have to delete a single preposition 'of'. It's awkward, it defeats the smoothness.

    wheelsal commented on Flames of Love

    07-17-2009

    flaming, howling.burning, cooking and all of the about. You said it all. Sally..............................

    nhorlandi

    07/17/2009

    yeah, thanks

    christliked commented on Flames of Love

    07-17-2009

    I like the passion in this poem I just dont think that words that have yhe same ending have the same pronounciation howl and crawl rhymes with while and wall

    nhorlandi

    07/17/2009

    sure, you're right. I was in doubt when I reviewed it myself Thanks

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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