Flaws

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this is an old poem of mine that i edited a little recently

Flaws

Everyone has their flaws,
yes,
including me,
some are obvious,
and some arnt as easy to see,
but can't we all just get along?
and let the flaws grow on us?
i don't easily trust,
love,
or hate,
all of which i state,
i always down myself,
but i bet you do too,
i care to little about myself,
and to much about others,
I always enjoy a good argument,
and I have many more,
a lifes worth in store,
but these are things,
that with time,
we all learn to adore,
because flaws are what make us us,
down to the very core.

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jj1562 commented on Flaws

11-04-2011

yes, check, ahuh, sure, me too, yeah my flaws show too now where are the people that will understand its not all that bad? good wite keep it up

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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