Flecks of Light

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    Flecks of Light

     

    flecks of light burning memories

    burning eyes, making droplets, tears fall

    beauty, love, sadness joined, departed in one moment

    destiny and  perpetual longing,  complete essence

     

    flecks of passion, hate joined, departed in one instant

    the journey goes on in the physical sense

    until that passage ends, love, sadness joins and departs

    in days and nights uncounted

     

    flecks of beauty and joy joined, separated evermore

    thrust together universal by destiny or fate, by a second

    neverending woven strands of beautiful moments, but not lost

    in centuries and millenniums

     

    -M.Jacobs

     

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    Rhymer commented on Flecks of Light

    04-22-2010

    Does love ever die or is only misplaced for a while, excellent write to ponder. 1o from me.

    danmartyjake1

    04/23/2010

    Rhymer, many thanks for your perspective on "Flecks of Light". I always appreciate hearing from you.

    gogant commented on Flecks of Light

    04-21-2010

    At first I thought this was an Einstein theory.....but, seriously, you show how something is good for a while, and then, because of an intrusion of a bad moment, the good is gone....but not forever.....in another moment, in another time, in another place, it is found and cherished once more. I enjoyed reading this one, along with all your pieces Marion....................................g

    danmartyjake1

    04/22/2010

    Many thanks for describing that lovely journey in which "Flecks of Light" helped you to discover. I am so appreciative for you comments and for reading so many of my poems. ;-)

    SavVySam commented on Flecks of Light

    04-15-2010

    Imagining all of that emotion woven in strands...wow, just envision that...and you have, wonderfully so...Nice work!

    danmartyjake1

    04/15/2010

    Bless You for reading and sharing your perspective of Flecks of Light!

    HarverTomsson commented on Flecks of Light

    03-11-2010

    How does one life stir the universe for forever? This is a fantastic perspective on influence. HT

    danmartyjake1

    03/13/2010

    Thanks for your supportive and kind compliment to "Flecks of Light", I never realized how it would touch others.

    79VETTE commented on Flecks of Light

    03-11-2010

    Thought provoking. I just hope that I will not be one of the rejects when my times comes. And if I have to go to the back of the line .I will be sad , as I turn to my wife and tell her that I won’t remember her. Perhaps we all should make these moments count. Thanks for writing very nice

    danmartyjake1

    03/11/2010

    Thoughts to ponder and return to as we go daily in our lives. Appreciate those close to us who love us beyond our limitations and shortcomings. Well said. Thanks for your response.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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